Haiku. Beware Deep Water.

Life-giving water
But if you sink beneath it
it will steal your breath.

© Jane Paterson Basil

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6 thoughts on “Haiku. Beware Deep Water.

  1. It does have atmosphere! I like how you contrasted the two sides of water ~ necessary for life yet deadly at times. “It will steal your breath” ~ great phrase to use to describe drowning.

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