within my bewildered brain
disorderly children play badminton
hitting asides, sometimes missing
while the shuttlecock veers off, ricochets wildly
irritating tired grey matter
with the tickling brush of feathers
increasing uncertainty
confusing the issue as I try to decide
the plastic-coated head briefly
adheres to a tenuous thought
my fingers nip, reach for a decision
but it slips away, zigzagging
to distant corners of my cortex
pinging up different aspects of my quandary
and I wish those wayward children
would give it a rest
©Jane Paterson Basil
Written for Writing 101: Day 3. One word prompt: UNCERTAINTY
Another amazing poem 🙂 I chose uncertainty too but not for a poem this time 🙂 Terrific use of the prompt, quite a surprise subject. Absolutely brilliant 😀
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Thank you again!
It surprised me too. I don’t know what gave me the idea.
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Isn’t that the great thing about using prompts! Did you take the Iowa How Writers Write Poetry MOOC earlier this year? Generative distraction I think one of the lecturers termed the process of using prompts, fragments or other confining starters for creating poetry or writing. Hopefully I remember that right! 🙂
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I’ve never even heard of the Iowa etc., but I wish I had.
I love using prompts. A couple of weeks ago my son jokingly suggested I write a trubute to horseradish, so I did!
If you are interested…
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And I loved the potential multi-interpretation of words like ‘pinging’…
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I will never look at a game of badminton in the same way! Very thought provoking and now I have the craziest images zipping round in my head like a shuttlecock thanks to your very creative piece of poetry, meant in a complimentary way! Thank you.
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Thank you!
Zipping – that’s a word I should have used…
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lol I like your piece very much the way it is but aren’t words grand!
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26 letters which you can group together to make so many words, and then you can arrange them in so many ways..
Incredible! I just love their limitless possibilities.
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Hi Jane. you have a nice blog. keep it up.
Cheers.
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Thank you. Ate you a prince, or is that just your name? I think I’ll check out your blog for clues.
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Lolz. It’s my name. Thank you for stopping by.
I am excited networking with inspiring people like you.
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Jane i will like us to connect and network together. cheers
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I love this poem.
I have shared it on my social media accounts.
Cheers,
Anand 🙂
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Thank you Anand!
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Welcome, Jane 🙂
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beautiful
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Oh! Good one! 😀
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Thanks Calen 🙂
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Love this! I’ve got some of those wayward children stuck in my head, too…
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Let’s burn them out… or maybe not.
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I love this! I love your tagline too!
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Thank you! I’m uncertain as to what I was uncertain about though!
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It takes time to be able to freely write your heart is saying.
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I’ve had a lot of practice…
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