my
friends gave it
willingly; the magic gift of
self-belief to tenuously cling
to, telling me I could do it, that
it doesn’t matter if I am late, but I
have the ability to reach my desired
destination, and I owe it to myself to
try. now I know that even if I do not
arrive before the final toll of the mid-
night bell, I will have succeeded all my
previous expectations. so now, with friends
to cheer me, I take my papyrus, my quill and ink, and
I scribble; I will scribble until I reach the winning post, or
until I hear the final toll of the bell as it rings, rings
in my
ear
Written for Writing 101 Poetry Day 1:
“And… the first prompt of the course is out: courtesy of @laduchessederat, it invites you to write a poem involving magic, whatever your take on the magical might be.”
©Jane Paterson Basil
And that is some kind of magic, the will to realize our dreams. Beautiful take on this prompt.
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Thank you. I threw it out quickly, because I’ve had a busy day over-eating (work’s Christmas dinner) and I feel sleepy, so I didn’t know whether the poem worked.
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Your shape poem is definitely magical! I want to learn how to do these properly!
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Thank you! I don’t do them often, but sometimes the idea jumps out at me.
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A gorgeous concrete poem! 🙂
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Thank you! It’s fun doing these…
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And you are great at it!! 😀
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This is awesome! And I love that it shapes a bell. I wish I could do that with my poetry.
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Thank you. You probably could do it – try it sometime…
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Loved your shape poetry. It was magical. 🙂
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Thank you! The idea just jumped out at me, and it;s such a simple shape to do.
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The first one I did was the shape of a cross. So I am newer to shape poetry too. 🙂
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A cross – it’s a good place to start. I can’t remember what my first one was, but it was for the four-week Writing 101 poetry course. It took me ages, because I was trying to impress.
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Love the bell shape! But it’s nearly 11:30 and I’m brain dead. Will read it again in the morning… Been a long day!
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Good morning! I hope you slept well, and your brain has sprung back to life.
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Very good! And of course you can do it! You had it in you all the time! That made a whole lot more sense this morning, even with only one eye opened! Was it uncomfortable carrying that bell around inside you? Did it cause ringing in your ears. I have that. But I doubt it’s from a bell! LOL Too many rock concerts growing up!
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I went to school with a boy whose father was involved in the music industry, and he had wrecked his ears by the time he was 15. It didn’t stop me from standing next to the speakers, and now I’m as deaf as a post, and I have tinnitus.
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I haven’t been diagnosed with tinnitus, but a good friend of mine has it and I sure do have the same symptoms. Though I understand diabetes can cause similar manifestations.
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How long have you had diabetes? Is it in the family?
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Yeah, it’s in the family. Was diagnosed in 2003. One month after Drollery was. It’s in his family, too.
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Both of you?Well, at least it makes your food preparation a bit simpler, and you’re less likely to find naughty, tempting snacks lying around.
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Oh ho! Care to guess again?
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Hmm – I see what you mean. You caught my most recent messages, but not the first one I sent this morning…
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What was the first one? Apparently I did!
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I’m replying to your reply to my response to the first one. Or to put it another way , this is the thread to my first message to you yesterday morning.
I hope I haven’t given you a headache! :0 🙂
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Nope… I got up with this one. And a sore leg from muscle spasms last night…
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Would that be cramp? I used to get cramp in bed when I was pregnant, and the only cure for it was to jump out of bed and stand up instantly. It wasn’t much fun, but better than the alternative.
If I could, I would wave a wand, and banish all of your health issues.
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Yep! That’s exactly what I did. I’ve just had plain old Charlie Horses the last couple nights. Too much driving, I think.
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Charlie Horses? I’m a foreigner and I have never heard that phrase…
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Spasms in the muscles on the back of your legs between your knees and your ankles.
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Oh, rights, that where I get them too…
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What do you call them? Just cramps?
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Yep! Think it’s the only common word we have for that condition…
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Such a positive n inspiring piece 🙂 I’d like to do the same
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Thank you Noorya! These days much of my inspiration comes from fellow bloggers – it’s a heartwarming community…
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Enjoyed reading that, all the very best Jane to you and yours for the New Year.
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Thank you Anna. I’m cautiously optimistic.
I wish you a happy New year too.
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