l e a v e s gently tremble as the branches sway. the spell they weave is picked up by the wind, and wafted through my open window. those strong trees protect me, cleaning the air, and vow to shelter my children long after I am forgotten. I know they will keep their prom ise
For anyone interested in trying visual poetry such as this, I’d like to illustrate how it is done using HTML. You simply go to HTML in your editor, arrange the writing as you wish, then put <pre> at the beginning, and </pre> at the end, like this:
<pre>leaves blah blah …… blah blah promise </pre>
Don’t go back to the visual editor or you may lose the format – although I just did that and got away with it.
Happy versification 🙂
©Jane Paterson Basil
So THAT’S how you do that! Does the “pre” stand for preformatted then? Nice poem, btw. I do so love trees and leaves!
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Thank you Calen – do you want to take a look another look? You’ll see something extra which I’m quite proud of…
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Oh cool! A leaf! That wasn’t there a minute ago, was it?
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No – I did the poem and the arrangement in a hurry, because I suddenly felt like sharing the technique. It was only after I posted it that the leaf idea occurred to me, so I had to do an edit…
As usual when I write about trees, I thought of you, and hoped that I’d get the edit out before you found the post…
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Awesome!
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Now I’m going back to scrap the first version, becuse it detracts from the second one 🙂
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Lovely poem and very helpful information, Jane! 🙂
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Thank you Carol – sometimes it’s hard to figure out how to find certain info, and I know a lot of people think this technique is much more complicated than it is, so I thought I’d do a post about it 🙂
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I look forward to following your advice sometime soon. I’ve had to resort to PowerPoint to force formatting in the past, and then save it as a photo (jpeg) in Paint. But this process makes the post unreadable in anything other than English…
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It’s funny you should say that – I wrote this post as a response to someone who told me only this morning that that was the way they did it. I’m so happy that this info may have been of some use 🙂
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I’ve just read your post How dare the
Media reframe History, and commented, but I think my comment went to your spam folder – it’s always happening to me for some reason – could you pull it out please. I’d like my support for that great post to be on record…
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Thank you, Jane. I did find your thoughtful comments…
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Love this Jane 🍃
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Thank you – when I lack inspiration, I look out of my window at the trees. I know I can rely on them 🙂
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They are totally inspiring!!!! 🌳🌳
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Ooh, now you see, that’s clever. My 12 year old already knows more about html than I do! Beautiful words, too Jane 🙂
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Thank you Lynn – that’s the only HTML I know without having to look it up 🙂
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Haha! A ton more than I know 🙂
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I don’t know a lot about nuclear physics, because I don’t have any use for it. Do you have any use for HTML? 🙂
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Ha! Good point. If I ever do, i’ll get my 12 year old to sort it out for me 🙂
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In this computer age, that’s one of the main reasons for having children 🙂
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None better now they aren’t allowed to sweep chimneys 🙂
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I was just about to make a glib remark about sending my son up chimneys when the horror of it hit me . I’m sure you read Water Babies…
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Horror indeed. Yes, I try not to remind my son too often that hoovering the floor and tidying his room are nothing compared to what our forbears went through, what children still go through in some parts of the world. Hard to believe these things were ever allowed. How lucky we are to be born in this time and place.
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Yes, much as we may complain, and although things could be better…
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Always could be better. And I suspect that will never change.
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It could be a lot better, with less greed and more compassion…
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Yes.Little on the horizon, I fear.
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Oh wow, this is amazing information! Thanks for sharing! I will definitely utilize this in the future… and I love the poem as well. I love nature, and you capture the magic of it well. Plus the shape just looks so perfect!
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Thank you Kathleen, and I’m glad you can make use of the info. Visual poetry is fun to do 🙂
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Awesome!! That seems so easy to do, I’ll give it a whirl next time I want shapey stuff 🙂
Beautiful poem too – the visual effect adds extra depth to it
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I learnt this technique on a 4 week WP poetry course run by Ben Hubermann. It hasn’t been repeated, and I don’t suppose it ever will, but it was incredibly useful. I think I still have all the assignments, and it would be great to post them, and invite people to do the course, but I have a feeling it’s not allowed 😦
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What a shame ! You could sneak snippets in over time, like this gem 🙂
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It’s a thought…
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Reblogged this on Ramblings of a Writer and commented:
I’m doing “Intro To Poetry” https://dailypost.wordpress.com/blogging-university/intro-poetry/. I’m having a little trouble, how to do it right. I came across this post, it will be a great help to me, so I’m sharing it with my readers. Thank you, Jane you are a great inspiration to us new writers learning to write poetry.
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Thank you – that’s a lovely thing to be told. Are you doing a visual poem? One of the great things about it it that readers are likel to miss imperfections in the verse, because they’re so blown away by the visual impact 🙂 I don’t think my poem would have wroked nearly as well without the leaf shape 🙂
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That was awesome! Great poem and great idea!
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Thank you 🙂
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I have just started to write poems, having a little problem understanding the lessons.
I do write by visual so I think I will continue with poetry as it helps the beginnings, then the other words usually flow on.
Thanks for the comment it helps, gives me ideas on how to approach writing poetry.
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The more you write poetry the more easily it comes – as long as you don’t keep trying to force rhyme by twisting a sentence into an ugly shape or using a word that sounds unnatural.
If you’re ryming and you get stuck, you can use this: http://www.rhymezone.com/
A dictionary of synonyms is also handy. Most people resort to such things now and again, whether they admit to it or not.
Have fun with it 🙂
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Thanks, appreciated. Have a nice day.
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You have a nice day – I’ll have a nice night. I live in the UK 🙂
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Love it….I dabble in HTML myself. Ive written a post with a sample HTML site for everyone to check out.
SO check it out! Thanks!
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Thank you – I’ll take a look…
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