Passion #tanka

Passion

their conversation

though light, has scarlet lining

like blood that rushes

pulsing around the body

aching to dance through the night

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(This poem was reformatted to go onto the red background, because it looks better that way, but the version beneath it is an authentic senryu.)

©Jane Paterson Basil

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11 thoughts on “Passion #tanka

        1. I think the gist of it is this: you have to pluck your eyebrows and wax sensitive portions of your body, and then realize that the whole thing is stupid, and just get on with your life.
          I missed out the preliminaries and went straight to getting on with my life, so I think I’ve made it to some kind of weird womanhood.
          The book is intelligent and very funny 🙂

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  1. A truly passionate poem Jane, hinting at endless hot nights. I like Caitlin Moran but haven’t read that book yet – she wrote a sitcom with her sister Channel 4 called Raised by Wolves about working class sisters being brought up by a single mum. Very sweary, fiesty and absolutely hilarious. How to be a woman indeed 🙂

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