. . . . . . . I love you. The wet dips and the dry crests of you. The wild living heart of you. I love every part of you. In spring you grow and deepen and in summer you glow. In autumn I leave you. As I walk away weeping, you rustle and sigh behind me, your extremeties dying. But winter is for sleeping and we have to part for a while. When warmer weather returns you will stretch and grow again. You will protect me and caress my spirit with a floor of flowers. You will welcome me into the depths of you. Again I will walk your verdant paths, and worship beneath your ever expand - ing canopy of green leaves The Daily Post #Tree ©Jane Paterson Basil
Fabulous! 🌹
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Awesome 🌲🌳
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Thank you Linda. I cheated – it’s a slightly edited version of something I wrote almost two years ago. I was curious to to see if it would get more noticed now I’ve got more followers. I think my poetry has become a bit samey and dull.
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I wouldn’t call it cheating Jane…..it’s new to your newbie followers and newbie bloggers….and it fits the prompt!! 😊 dull is not a word I’d use to describe your writings Jane..nope not at all!!
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Thank you – it’s just that I was reading through some of my old stuff and I thought a lot of it was better than my current poetry.
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I guess I can relate a bit in the sense that I do go back and reread old journal entries to ‘see’ where my head was at back then…what’s interesting to me is how I lied to myself in my own journals..making things sound better than they were
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Maybe you thought that you could make what you pretended come true?
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I don’t know Jane…..it seems silly now, in light that I’ve ‘come clean’ with myself here…..I haven’t written in my journal in a while..but I know that when I do pick it up and resume, I’ll be journaling differently…
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Good. It’s not quite a journal if you bend the truth…
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Love this! I haven’t seen someone use this idea in a while, writing poetry in the shape of the subject. Cool. 🙂
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Thank you! Lately I’ve had too many words in my head to focus on the visuals – I must go back to it 🙂
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Totally cool!!!
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Thank you Calen. It’s about the forest campsite I lived and worked in a coupla years ago…
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I guessed as much. 😀
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🙂
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Lovely.
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Thank you Imelda.
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So cool – image ‘n all 🙂
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Thanks Raili 🙂
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Lovely tribute to your forest… or the forest you belong to…
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The visual effect was definitely beautiful. But what I really liked was how you talk of the tree as if it’s your best friend. Someone who’s moods you are familiar with and vice versa. Very nice.
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Thank you!
I hope I don’t sound silly when I say trees have always been kind to me. I’ve always been able to turn to them in times of trouble, although the trees in town aren’t able to nurutre in the same way. Maybe they have too many confusing energies surrounding them. Even the healthiest ones aren’t happy.
I’m a country person.
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It doesn’t sound silly. Trees release a lot of prana during the day which helps people heal. The healthier the tree, more the energy. But not after sunset.
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And yet people in the UK don’t know stuff like that without carrying out scientific tests! They did the tests, and found that trees ARE nurturing. I could have told them that when I was 6.
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Lol. You have plenty of alternate career options 🙂 jokes apart, children are born with instinctive knowledge that years of education slowly but surely smothers. I teach my son to think and imagine the wildest stuff he can. He’s 4 but the studies are already headed far away from magic and fairies…
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He’s a lucky child to have you as his mother.
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Or I am 🙂
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That’s one of the reasons he’s lucky – because you feel that way…
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