Today the rhyme eludes my mind
and autumn sunshine fails to cheer;
leaves glow gold but I am blind;
submerged in murky thoughts and fears.
Sweet birds sing tunes to humankind,
but traffic clatter fills my ears;
mild reason is so hard to find
through bleary fog of bottled tears.
I wash my face and blot my eyes
to lift the mist that shrouds my soul,
then sit and watch the world, and try
to find a worthwhile, winning goal.
The shimmering trees and whimsy sky
soon lead me from that deadened hole;
with fresh-sprung hope I question why
I loosed my grip on self control.
©Jane Paterson Basil
This is very lovely 🙂
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Good one.
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Thank s Calen. Sorry I haven’t been around lately. Something odd has happened to time.
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I’ve been feeling like I need a bit of a sabbatical, too. Going through an internal thing I’m not familiar with…
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Want to talk about it?
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Not yet. Still trying to figure out why I’m feeling the way I do after all the inner work I’ve done. Maybe later. Thanks.
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Anytime.
We humans are complex creatures…{{{Hugs}}}
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Such a charming and delightful rhyme.
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Thank you 🙂
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Love the flow of this one and all the sensory imagery!
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Thanks Kathleen. I neded a focus, and rhyme seemed to be the answer 🙂
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Beautiful and lyrical.
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Thank you 🙂
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Felt like this, love the graphic
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Thank you. Wouldn’t it be lovely looking out of the window was a genuine cure for depression…
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Awesome
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Thank you -Talula? Is that your real name?
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🙂 No. It’s an alias, but many people close to me do refer to me by that name.
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I love it 🙂
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This is fantastic, Jane. Words just pour out of you and their juxtaposition is flawless. And all from a commented observation you made yesterday? Love it!
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Thank you, Safar. I’m having difficulty with words at the moment. I’m glad it doesn’t show.
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Wish I had that difficulty!!
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Not sure that came out right – but I think you’ll know what I mean? (fingers crossed).
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I do. I know what you mean 🙂
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Phew!
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🙂
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Be careful what you wish for 🙂 There’s a lot of garbage that goes with it.
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So very beautiful!
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