I see you;
your retrograde ego recalling lost glories,
eyes dimming each time you walk past the mirror,
as you blind your dumb soul with the chill of your heart.
I see you;
your shallow charms, your grasping arms
~ your stance aping that of a gentleman ~
as you think to fatten each perceived victim,
in a bid to fill your stagnant harem.
I see you;
thinking to win them with takeaway treats,
or tasteless roast dinners plucked from the freezer,
speedily heated and served with fool’s flourish,
and free cigarettes, and cans of strong lager,
and cheapest milk chocolate, and liquorice sweets,
for every sinner who flies in to visit
your vinegar pickled, jerry-built web.
To them, no angel or devil are you;
but a simple, wrinkled trick;
a lewd wallet, spewing cash on delivery.
They belong not to you, but to the night;
buying their prize beyond your sticky sight.
I see you;
your ill-concealed arachnid fangs,
grinning lips seeping thin syrup with bitter stink.
Your organ of male greed may stretch, but it can’t reach me.
I hunger neither for drug money,
nor shallow wallow in semen-stained bed.
And why me?
Did you think I would be a cheaper option;
a practical economy,
or did my steel celibacy offend?
Was it one, or both, of the above,
or were you toying with a dream of love?
Pray, entertain me, sick Prince;
did you really think
you were in the running
for even a sliver of me?
I see you;
sad, pale fake of a man.
Beating hearts have no place in your cold domain.
Feebly, you play the sly spider king,
clumsily spitting your flimsy synthetic silk toward me,
but I break it with a breath,
hissed between clenched teeth.
I see you;
tumbleweed briefly tangling at your feet,
then, freed by a mild puff of wind,
rolling away to safety.
©Jane Paterson Basil
I enjoyed this poem. Artwork and words. Outstanding.
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Thank you. Revenge poetry is my speciality 🙂
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing poetry by a talented writer. Please read and enjoy.
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Thank you for the reblog and the generous words, John.
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You are welcome Jane.
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🙂
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Phenomenal! 🌹
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Thank you – maybe I’m finally back on form 🙂
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Wow! You’ve come back with a vengeance. Who’s in the crosshairs now? That image – one of photoshopped ones? It’s stunningly arachnid 🙂
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This has been building up inside me for weeks. It’s dedicated to a man I thought was an angel – until I met him. Maybe I’ll post the story , but it’s a bit humiliating to admit I walked into a spider’s web – not that it did me any harm…
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Intriguing……we all walk into webs unknowingly from time to time
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I suppose – but it was obvious that Claire thought I’d been pretty naive…
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It’s all in the eye of the beholder. It’s easy to be critical of someone when you are not in their shoes. Just sayin’ ……
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Claire’s very anti men at the moment…
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That would account for her view point then !
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So it would seem…
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WOW. That’s it, just plain “wow.”
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Thank you. That was a poem which needed to come out.
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Great poem but I wouldn’t want to be at the other end of your pen.
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Thank you, Bernadette. I’m sure I would have only kind words for you. Maybe I should post the backstory to this poem…
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Yes, please do.
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I’m trying to make a poem of it; its not easy.
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Hm… The picture confused me. How do they relate?
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Trust you to notice that the picture tells a different story… 😉
I could make excuses – come up with an explanation, but the truth is, I got bored with looking for the right female image to go with the spider – she should have been walking away from it.
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Now that’s interesting because I can see a relationship between the two – the image and the poem. It’s in the moments before she realises she’s been caught in the web 🙂
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YES! I’ll go along with that – thanks, Raili, for helping me out. 😉
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🙂
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wow….very phenomenal………
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Thank you, Stephen.
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I thought nature poems will be your speciality. But in this poem, you have wrote about altogether different topic of revenge; it depicts nothing but your versatility. Another very well composed poem.
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To my shame, I write a revenge poem every time someone angers me, but I enjoy many subjects and genres.
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