I shout the truth and defy you to say I am lying.
I speak in the name of justice,
there is no pretty picture on the page,
and it doesn’t matter if my rhythm is awry.
My words don’t have to flow gently
or make my readers sway and dream.
This time my poem doesn’t need to rhyme.
I shout the truth and defy you to say I am lying.
You played dirty games and isolated my beloved child.
You told lies to get your way.
You sweet-talked us then you beat my daughter
because you couldn’t own her.
You ground her face into sharp staples on your naked floor,
then you tried to break her neck.
This time my poem doesn’t need to rhyme.
I shout the truth and defy you to say I am lying.
You say she did it to herself, but nobody believes you.
The state of her face and head stand witness.
Maybe you want me to believe you are ill,
and your viscious attack was the act
of an unconscious side of your personality,
but it won’t work.
This time my poem doesn’t need to rhyme.
I shout the truth and defy you to say I am wrong.
In your rage, you thought to destroy her,
but you failed. Her wounds will be healed
by her own strength, and by endless love.
You only destroyed yourself.
Chemicals may sometimes silence
the screaming in your head to mere murmeration,
but like the noise from a flock of starlings,
the rumblings will always return.
You will not escape them.
This time my poem doesn’t need to rhyme.
I shout the truth and defy you to say I am wrong.
I speak in the name of justice.
There is no pretty picture on the page,
and it doesn’t matter that my rhythm is awry.
My words don’t have to flow gently
or make my readers dreamily sway.
My friends will all agree;
this time my poem doesn’t need to rhyme.
Hey, Joe,
You have incited my wrath, and I repeat;
this time my poem doesn’t need to rhyme.
I speak out against your heinous crime, and that is enough.
Written for The Daily Post #Murmuration
©Jane Paterson Basil
Wow, Jane. Powerful, powerful. Your words never need to rhyme.
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Thank you Judy – I went too far when I mentioned his full name. I’ve deleted it now…
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Phenomenally Powerful!
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Thank you Dorna.
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Cruelty, no matter what the excuse, must be called out. Brava.
Shared to FB.
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Thank you for sharing it – at some point I’ll have to tell the whole story – as a warning to vulnerable people who may be trapped by charming, violent predators, but right now I’m too angry and upset.
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Speaking your powerful Truth. Well done! 😉 xoM
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Thank you Margarita. I hope the perpetrator of that horrible crime reads it.
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More important that you said it, Jane. 😉 xoM
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Wow! Seriously? That jerk said Laura did it to herself? Tell me want woman has so little vanity that she would ground staples into her face… What a putz!
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That’s what he’s telling everybody, but one of her friends took photos of her the next day, and she knows the same people he talks to. I’ve never had much time for that woman, but I want to give her a hug for the various kinds of support she’s given Laura.
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Go you, Jane ! Tell it like it is. I AM MOTHER HEAR ME ROAR !!
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Strong words may be concealing pain. Welldone
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Thank you Tamal. Yes, I am hurting, but I mustn’t focus on that while my daughter needs my support.
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Your anger is tangible, Jane. Hope justice prevails. Love that you poem doesn’t rhyme.
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Thank you, Safar. I expect you agree that rhyme would have made it too contrived.
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🙂
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I’m so sorry Jane. And after things had been going better for her. You call the bugger out. He should be thoroughly ashamed of himself. I hope she recovers quickly x
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He’s like a raging bull. Last night he threatened to beat up a friend of mine, and rang me immediately afterwards to say that if I don’t keep my mouth shut he’ll call the police! The police know what happened, but their hands are tied – because of Laura’s history the case would never get past the CPS. They had to drop charges against him.
There’s something else I’d like to tell you, but I can’t, as this is a public platform, and it may endanger Laura.
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Oh, Jane. Can we hope that as he’s such a bastard he might get caught doing something else? Not that I wish for anyone else to be caught, but just for this awful human being to be out of your lives. Poor Laura. I hope she can steer clear of him. Do keep safe, both of you. Much love X
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I think he may lie low for a while. Laura’s just glad to be away from him. She’s moving to a city you may have heard of.
I believe the city has a flower shop…
xxx
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Really? I hope the move goes well for her. Such a good idea for her to get away for a while. x
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I’m sorry Jane. Wish I could be there to be give you a hug.
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I’m a lucky woman. These days I have all the support I need locally, and when I go on WP, I have great people like you, who really care.
Whenthe crisis is over I hope to pay it all back xxx
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I’m glad you’ve got local support. It helps to be able to speak the reality to another person. This wordpress community makes up for some gaps in support. Take care of you as I know you will. Keep safe. Hugs!!!
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Thank yo. You too – look after yourself.
Hugging you right back xxx
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Nice is not a nice word here. Great is overabundant but not much so, enjoyed about says it. Keep not rhyming when it is necessary.
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Thank you, Lee. Joe beat my daughter to a pulp. I was so angry that I didn’t care how my poem sounded. He died last October of a heroin OD. Few tears were shed. He had 24 convictions for violence, in a world where folk rarely complain to the police. He picked on the vulnerable.
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You wonder how God loves some people, but I am told he does love them–nonetheless. If I could only reach that. Most of us can’t and so we make poems like this one.
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It helps us to get it out of our system, at least.
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