This is just a quickie, if you’ll pardon the pun…
She couldn’t resist what she saw
when she gazed at her brother-in-law.
He slipped her a key
thinking no-one would see
through a solid wood bedroom door.
But sometimes walls contain eyes
that record our deceit and our lies.
Their passion was brief
and their randy relief
preceded a nasty surprise.
A candid camera had caught ‘er
doing what she didn’t aughta.
her behaviour so lewd
was what started the feud
with her mother’s other daughter.
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©Jane Paterson Basil
Whimsical and mischievous, loved your pun…
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I was about to go to bed when I read the word prompt, Candid. I couldn’t resist it, with its aura of naughtiness 🙂
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You are a cheeky mischievious one, aren’t you xx
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I have my wicked side – unfortunately, it doesn’t often come out these days 🙂
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We do slow down, but I’m still fairly cheeky
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You think I hadn’t spotted that? 🙂
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Haha , as they say, Takes one to know one. And Btw how’s everything going with the kids after the recent dramas.
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They’re coping well, especially when you consider that their dad died over a fortnight ago, and his funeral is still two weeks away. The crematorium has to cater to a large population, and the bodies are piling up.
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Oh my, that’s an unusually long time
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Around here? Not any more…
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Oh well, let’s hope they all keep coping ok, and what about you, are you ok
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I’m anxious about my son, who has to find somewhere to live, and I’m worried about the house clearance – Paul’s having trouble letting go of his dad’s things, and there are all sorts of other complications which I can’t speak of on a public site. I’m fine otherwise. I know it will all be OK in the end.
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That all sounds a complicated for Paul
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It is, but it will be good for him to move on, and having to take adult steps will build his confidence. Mike was horrendous. He only ever did whatever he felt like doing. He could be kind or cruel. He broke promises, told lies, offered what he knew wasn’t required, refused what was needed and easy to give, he pampered and bullied. He refused to take me to hospital when I was seriously ill, yet offered me lifts when I preferred to save fuel and catch a bus. He needed to always be in control, and to feel superior. He was Paul’s role model, so Paul learned some of his tricks – though not all. Despite all that, Paul has a compassionate nature, and he’s fragile. Now he’s free to become a man, at 30. My poor boy…
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Oh Jane, I sincerely hope that he takes his adult steps into rest of his life, at 30 he’s got a lot of wonderful years ahead of him. And I’m glad you’re going ok too.😊xx
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I’ve learnt to cope with my constant anxiety. That’s important xx
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I know how that feels, and well done dear Jane 😊 x
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Down here it’s all over in a week.
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We used to reckon on for to five days, years ago. Something needs to be done about the problem. I’m not sure how undertakers are coping. their space must be limited.
What a morbid subject…
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Yes chane of subject
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🙂 xx
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I’ll send you my happy new little poem
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2018/01/23/clear-blue-jar/
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Well done!
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Thank you – just a bit of silly fun… 🙂
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Reblogged this on crjen1958 and commented:
A story toadally honest.. You must follow this blogger, i have been for sometime, only unable to read each post..
i’m sorry darling..
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Thanks Chris, for your words and the reblog…
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You are welcome, i thank you for the follow..
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Camera, camera everywhere darling, methanks…
i see you…
Keep no secrets…
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Our thoughts certainly crossed on this one, Jane.
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Ha! I just read your post. It seems the word Candid brings the same image to both of our minds.
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Do you love it that the daily prompt, over two hours late today, was “tardy?” I had to contact them and see if it was on purpose.. Just had to know. A tech is checking up on it now. (I”d reported it to them at 10 that it still wasn’t posted.)
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Ha ha – I missed that. I made the mistake of posting a poem on the writer’s site that I joined last year (and have ignored for months – so I’ve been pretty tardy, too). There was a lot to catch up on.
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Good one!
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Thank you 🙂
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A touch of mischief. A pleasure to read. And yeah, in today’s world there are cameras everywhere.
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Thank you.
I keep my living room curtains open at night, and sit near my window, where I write, often looking out at the stars and the street lights. Sometimes I wonder who might be watching me.
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The night sky can be an inspiration
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Yes- even when there are few stars to be seen…
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😀 I see you’re branching out! LOL
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I felt mischievous last night 🙂
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Oh my! Quiet the Surprises! 😎🥀
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It’s been a long time since I last displayed my silly side… 🙂
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Aha! Caught with the pants down 🙂
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Disgraceful! 🙂
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*wicked grin*
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