They weep at the shore
feeding fish to the waves,
hoping to bribe the helpless sea
to free you.
Brave souls leap in thinking to shield you
within a synchronised circle of love,
but the vampire dives through
and with eyes honed
by a chemical sharpening stone
he traps you.
You can only swim so far.
When the energy goes you will float
until the weight on your chest
presses you into the drink.
The instant you sink,
let your body go limp.
Take deep breaths;
allow your lungs to sup
until they welcome the salty brine.
The saline will soothe your wounds.
The vampire
will chase you to the ocean bed,
staying close, clinging on,
flaying your mind as it did
when your toes were still dry,
yet lie quiet; you are destined
to lose any fight.
.
No need to say you did not choose this,
it is understood. Few of us
elect to be pursued
by blood-sucking ghouls.
Don’t waste energy wishing
for new tomorrows or reminiscing
over the innocence that preceded
the need to teach yourself
to breathe underwater.
Forget the optimism of youth.
There is only now;
only this;
a silent you
and an angry parody of humanity
seething in the deep.
Daily Addiction: Pursue
©Jane Paterson Basil
Amen. 😈😇😎🥀
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This is very deep Jane. I’ve read it twice now, and you’ve left feeling the sea is my savior. And of course I loved your finale.
” Don’t waste energy wishing
for new tomorrows or reminiscing
over the innocence that preceded
the need to teach yourself
to breathe underwater.
Forget the optimism of youth.
There is only now;
only this;
a silent you
and an angry parody of humanity
seething in the deep.”
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Thank you Ivor. Poetry is a strange thing – it takes you into the depths of your mind, showing you things you didn’t know were there. Sometimes I read something I wrote only a few weeks ago, and I’m surprised by the words I’ve written.
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Yes Jane, I know exactly what you mean, I’m often surprised by what I’ve written, and I wonder “did I really write that”. One of my latest ones “Waiting Time” was so deep a meaningful for me, I was stunned by what wrote. 😊 😊 ❤️ I xxxx
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So was – and I think it’s the first time I’ve ever known you to mention your father…xxxx
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Oh, over the 17 months, I think I’ve mention dad lots of times, but don’t worry, I can’t remember any of the poems I’ve written, I have to go back to my catalogue to find them, hmmm, this one from two weeks ago
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2018/09/27/morning-tea-with-dads-orchids/
And here is one of my fav’s
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2018/02/21/i-do-thee-shine/
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I’m sorry I missed them at the time… xxx
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Don’t dare fret, we just do the best we can.
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xxxxxxx
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May be life is meant to be like this for many of us. It’s not giving up but just letting life take over. Sigh.
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I agree. In the end you learn only to fight the battles you can win.
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How very true.
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The ending lines are wonderful, and the central image of the sea and being in it is engaging.
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Thanks Paul.
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New depths of you are emerging in your writing Jane. I saw in a comment you wrote on Candice’s site (the collaborative poem you did) that things are not so good for you at the moment. I worry. I pray for you. I send you much love and blessings xxx
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Thank you for those kind words, Raili. With the help of my wonderful daughters and the support of my friends, I’ll get through it. I always do, but it gets harder every time. Maybe I’ll start taking all the meds that my doc prescribes. Get myself zombied up so nothing can touch me.
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